This is a very interesting form
It seems laughter is taken to heart one way or another

I laugh at him,
Yet he writes
Another poem for me.

Beautifully chosen ending. The whole thing was just amazing.
..__MiNDYY

Sorry. i got a laugh outa that. the arrogance was just funny.

great job with the view point. =]

i liked this poem.

and id like to point out, some people are just mean, too mean. they keep there pretty little heads shoved up cloud asses, and think they are too high and mighty.

=P

5/5.

Great poem! Very nice flow and words especially when using them {in sort-of}another point of view. Its hard to let go when some-one you care for leaves you but i serriously applaud you for having the strength to use your feelings and emotions to rite an amazing poem. 5/5.

Wow that was great liked the style unique 5/5

Wow, it was beautifully written, she obviously doesn't know what she is missing out on with you. your an amazing writer and i bet you are a wonderful person, nicely written, 5/5

I love it good job

This is a good poem. it goes together quite nicely. a good read. this poem also touched me in one of those ways, ya know. i have been one of the ones writting

Sorry cut off to soon....anyways i have been one of the ones writting poems for a person who cares nothing at all for me....so i know how you feel. but keep up the goood work.

Wow i wrote a poem just like this but yours is way better, mine cud be improved on, i like ur better tho, great work 5/5