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Everyone says that loving you was a mistake.
I remember kissing you, the way your lips felt
against mine.
I remember you holding me, telling me everything was going to be okay, always there beside me, my love, my best friend.
I remember laying there next to you, thinking, wow this guy really does have feelings for me, you were the only one that told me that wouldn't hurt me, and to be honest with you, you never have hurt me in anyway. you always were careful about that kind of stuff. and I can't thank you more.
I think back to when we had our first kiss, the way I felt in your arms, oh so bittersweet. I go back to the day when you kept on making it a point to show me how you feel, in every way possible. if you were a mistake. you were the BEST mistake i've ever made! I just hope god puts you back into my life, brings you back to me. lets everyone understand, how much we love eachother, because I know its there, I feel it, and so do you!
