by Julie Jun 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Forget the nights we shared and the days i spent with |
by ephemera
This is amazing piece. I love the flow, but more importantly I admire the choice of words and how they cuttingly present the image you are trying to paint. |
I really like this ALOT! That was really really good.. I'm definately adding it to my favorites. |
by malina
Flawless!! congrats on such a fine writing! |
by June
A beautifully writtem poem ,and one that I coudl relate to ,something I have experienced so I could feel the emotion in this piece.Very well done and thank you for your comment on mine too. |
by reborn
Very good poem. broken relationships huh? i know what ur dealing with here been there believe me. i liked ur rimes, and the forget and remember dynamic. 4/5 |