Very good poem. broken relationships huh? i know what ur dealing with here been there believe me. i liked ur rimes, and the forget and remember dynamic. 4/5

A beautifully writtem poem ,and one that I coudl relate to ,something I have experienced so I could feel the emotion in this piece.Very well done and thank you for your comment on mine too.

Flawless!! congrats on such a fine writing!

I really like this ALOT! That was really really good.. I'm definately adding it to my favorites.

This is amazing piece. I love the flow, but more importantly I admire the choice of words and how they cuttingly present the image you are trying to paint.

This is excellent,
Astryd