I am not a big fan of this poem.

It is an okay poem. I will give you that,

Alhtough you have been here a while so i would think you can do better,

\keep trying, you will be a great poet yet. I promise.

Hmm, so i agree with sam.
its an okay poem and i rate it 4/5.
there were quite a few spelling errors.
especially in these two lines,
"i lost her trust, along with My dignity
i life will be full of uncertain;y and dis may"
there are a few more throughout your poem also.
anyway keep up the good work

Good poem. Lots of people can relate to its message.