by jason Jun 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Have you ever |
Aw that was adorable...i didn't think it was corney at all : ) i loved it 5/5 <33 |
by Alesia
What a beautiful dedication. There's nothing wrong with a little corny. I thought it was very sweet. The look of this poem was interesting, I found I had to read it really fast because I didn't know where to stop and when start, but it's not such a bad thing. It's almost like when thoughts race around your head and your pen wont move fast enough, not to mention that it's like a racing heart. So, it was a very cool poem. |
by ourlilsecret
Awww.. |
by Fsams
Wow you are superb I would say, you must continue writing love poems. The whole poem is cohesive and the words nicely strung each other. All positive points :) |
by ABake
Awww, and yes I am loving like this right now. |