This was very sweet, it wasn't entirely touching, but it was so strong and showed such a passion for love that it was amazing. the flow was really good too, even though the poem was in a different style, it worked extremely well. (and i would like to know who you love laura)
5/5
xoxo
gabriella

I don't want to look stupid, but i think it's hard to understand.
I'm sorry, i'm a lil bit dumbass.. Hahahaa...
Maybe it's happen when amateur read a masterpiece. ^^
But I think love this poem. It made me learn. Nice poem. ^^

Thats really sweet Laura - wow you must've fallen for this guy pretty hard already!! :) Very eternal and very strong feelings.

Hope things turn out how you want them to.

Mo
xx

I love this kind of romantic poems. And I liked this one too. You've a good style of writing.

I loved it! it was soo sweet! and much of it can be interpreted in different ways, making it relate to many people!

wonderful job! <3

Great poem laura. "Heal my soul with words through years;
Be careful because life fulfilled it with fears" was a great piece.. i loved it and it was very powerful.. you can just think about the many meanings of it. 5/5

O my God honey I am so so surprised. I can now read your heart honey. Its so sweet of you to write this cute poem. I will cherish each and every single line in it. I have for the first time put a poem in my favourites list. Just you deserve more than 5. TC

Wow, your writing really is good, you have a unique talent and this was a very powerful and effective poem. well done xxxxx

This was really sweet and powerful.
Amazing job, darling.
Perfect flow in my opinion.
Take care. xxx
5/5

-Heather

"Let this affective glamour glide;
Maybe you know the connection will decide
How long it will last but no matter what,
I want to be with you for you." - beautiful stanza.
You did great job on this one, I like everything about it.
5/5

This is not entirely sweet but its sweet..i lik ur word choice and idk it seems lik its more diffrent than others idk y.. but a 5
/5

This is ok good im proud you had enough courage to post this about some one

poems about poeople are hard to share
hope he likes u for u to
liz B)

Awww that's so adorable! great work
5/5
.x

Definantly sweet. The first line drew me in with your choice of words. Great job.

Omg so good ! Heal my soul with words through years;
Be careful because life fulfilled it with fears
You will be the one no matter what,
I want to say yes, a gift from me to you.

that was my fav part it had a lot of meaning to it .

Great job 5/5 keep it up

Um i dont know how to explain it but, yes its sweet not as touching as sweet, but i get the message, but like.. how you always put like

something something.. you type of thing it just doesnt like sound write...

other than that it was really good.

(pfft sorry that was really hard to understand hahahahah)

Such a sweet love poem.
loved each sentence, keep it up
u seem like a great poet
gd luck dear
nanz

I have read much of your poetry and find this to be one of your best i'm not sure if your on my favorites list but if your not thats where your going this dose not sound at all chessy and I love how you kept the same last two words in the last two lines of every stanza as well as rhyming the last teo words in the first two lines of each stnza this really caught my eye.