Very good language use and well put together poemxxxx

Very good very good:)):))

I loved it for sure:))keep it up:))

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WOW excellent poem ,sad , very heartfelt , but really good , well worded and beautifully written, great job, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Wow, This is one amazing poem such depth and emotions run through the rhyming, I could just sense the emotion while slowly reading at a slowly pase through each word Keep it up xxx