Comments : It Just Won't Last

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Oh... why do your poems make me sad?
    this is so true and beautiful, i've always tried to say something like that but i never can... i clap for you for that. wow, the flow is wonderful and the emotion is this poem is really deep and amazing...
    5/5
    luv
    gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    I adore this piece. It was, in fact, written and presented rather well and sound. The overall diction and flow of words were terrific. As a result, on the whole, I give you my props for writing such a fantastic piece. ~Marian

  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    I love this! It is sooooo true. This was amazing. I defintely give this a 5...Awesome work! Xx Chrissie