This was sweet, the ending made me smile, though this is so true.. you did a really good job writing this.. the flow was really good and the meaning was there. the only thing i would say is instead of 'I'll born again' i would switch that too: 'I'll be born again'
5/5 for it though
gabriella

Good job!!
my fav lines are "Everything has its beginning.
every new beginning comes from an end."