This is a nice poem 4 real i like how you put everything in right catyegories that fit em its real dope

I adore this piece. How vivid the imagery your words portrayed! It was, in fact, written and presented rather well and sound. The overall diction and flow of words were terrific. As a result, on the whole, I give you my props for writing such a fantastic piece. ~Marian

Mo,

You have some great lines here. I like how you you captured the essence of each word you described.

Well done,

Always,
Jeannie