Mere Memory

Very simple but interesting. It isn't totally unique but it is written greatly. Some lines are incredible. Excellent imagery and very powerful atmosphere. 5/5

(I�m) you need to fix that little minor error within this poem and change it to I'm. I belived this poem was touching and I liked the word choice throughout it. A much better piece then the last one I read from you. Well done. ~mel

Its like Iâ??m unseen
it should be i am

I wonder as I lay
In deep thought I gazed
See the rain fall
And let it touch my face

i think it must have been "I let it touch my face" do think over its just my perception
4/5 for it
and ya do comment on my poems

Even if you were bored. This poem touched me!