I adore this piece. It was, in fact, written and presented rather well and sound. The overall diction and flow of words were terrific. As a result, on the whole, I give you my props for writing such a fantastic piece. ~Marian

5/5
amazin

Such a deeply painful but amazing poem. Truly a heart tugger. I couldn't help but think of past ex's whenever I read this. You did an excellent job with this piece, I hope you continue writing. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~