by Bryan Jun 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
What is and what never should be, |
by aDORKable x3
Bryan dear, what a touching poem! I know what it's like to feel that way and then have it all shattered in an instant. Great use of the title as the last line. Keep it up babe! 5/5!! |
by Melpomene
Such a beautiful piece portraying such sad rare emotions which you put into a greatly written piece of poetry. I truely loved this and found it to be great from beginning to end without a problem. Great work~mel |
by mimzy
Great write.. hope it isn't true.. |
by Rachel RTVW
This is so sad! |
It's nice...in the beggining it started off rather ok...but then by the end it became really good. I liked the last stanza the most..yeah Like Mo said...you tied it up real well |