Aw. That was beautiful, but sad. I really like how you always tie the title into the last line of the poem....or make the title from the last time of the poem, whichever you write first I guess. But it was awesome! Flowed perfectly and everything...keep it up!!

~Mo~
"moo"

I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM! it almost nailed how i feel right now. made me cry a bit. just the reasoning is difffrent between me and her. haha well anwys. good poem. 5/5 loved it.

Well I can relate to this poem Bryan. If it really happened to you, I'm sorry man.

Anyway great vocab, Flow was smooth and I like the emotions in it.

5/5 as always.

Great poem i think i understand this situation sort of
thx for the comment and yes i speak french i live in canada right beside quebec most poeple here speak french it is our secondary language plus it helps majorally to get a job out here lol thx for reading it i didntknow how many peole would actually be able to read it lol

keenan

It's nice...in the beggining it started off rather ok...but then by the end it became really good. I liked the last stanza the most..yeah Like Mo said...you tied it up real well

This is so sad!

Great write.. hope it isn't true..
but amazing work.. 5/5

Such a beautiful piece portraying such sad rare emotions which you put into a greatly written piece of poetry. I truely loved this and found it to be great from beginning to end without a problem. Great work~mel

Bryan dear, what a touching poem! I know what it's like to feel that way and then have it all shattered in an instant. Great use of the title as the last line. Keep it up babe! 5/5!!