Up Against the Wall

by StormyStar   Jun 22, 2007


You took my hand and led me away
Together forever you said that day
By my side is where you'll stay
But you lied to me and thats not okay

Pushed me up against the wall
You stood above me, you stood so tall
The way you kissed me it felt so wrong
My feelings for you are gone
we've been together for too long

You cant push me around anymore
You wont let me go out that door
Holding me back from things I need
Why don't you see, you cant love me

Just let me go be happy with him
You mean nothing to me not even as friend
Your grip was too tight
I'm sick of you get out of my sight

i could not breath so i need to go
your not who i want and Ive let you know
we cant go on this way anymore
i once loved you but now your a bore

I'm moving on so you should too
find a new girl that will be good for you
good bye forever my old best friend
you wont care, so you'll pretend

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  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Great poem! I love your work 5/5
    xx love

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is my favourite so far. this was beautifully written, and holds so much beauty and elegance within the written words. the only thing i didn't like was some parts rhymed and some didn't. it throws off the flow. also try and extend your vocabulary to add in more depth. apart from that, i loved this piece.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    I think this is one of your best... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Am I the ONE?

    I love this poem... wow... your writtings are amazing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    The flow was very good. This seemed to fit nicely together and read very smooth. It is a gret release when we can finally say the dreaded good-bye; even when we do not want too...

    --Sher

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