by luv Shelbz luv Jun 22, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I scream as I wake up |
by Chelsey
Its a good poem. |
by tears i cry
It was good but like a few other people have said it sounds forced i still gave you 5/5 for trying |
~I like this one!! Great Job!~ |
by Cella Bella
There was some really nice vocab towards the end there. Great emotion here, it made for a wonderful poem. |
Aw so sad.... the title was pretty though. :) 5/5 |