by ShadyPyro Jun 22, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I Sit And I Chill |
by Fsams
Hey this one is kinda unique poem. I like the short and simple wordings in it. Great and nice style. keep up the good work. God bless you 5/5 from me. :) |
by Vanessa
Simple short, and effective. The emotion could have been a little stronger, other than that excellent job, nice flow, well penned. try stepping up the vocab a bit to add power. 5/5 |