U & My Pain

by KeyxMashingxParody   Jun 22, 2007


Calling, I hear the voices,
Trembling, I feel the pain...

The light fades into the darkness,
And I no longer know the warmth of the sun.
The skies begin to burn with hell's fire,
And I am left alone,I am the only one.

Screaming, I hear the voices,
Shaking, I feel the pain...

The burning clouds above me,
Follow every crawl and movement I make.
Angels cry out my name in fear,
I pinch myself, am I awake?

Crying, I hear the voices,
Dying, I feel the pain...

The light shows it's deceitful face again,
And I can see my battered reflection.
Realizing you were never there,
Never cared, without your protection.

I can live without you...

-Liz-

(This is one I wrote a while back ago, this is one of the poems that my friends would read and call me a metaphor lover. This poem is just a huge metaphor, and may be hard to understand. Just letting you guys know. Thank you if you read.)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow amazing. The metaphores are beautiful and you really have the analogical power. Your poem is awesome with both lexical and poetic quality. 5/5 for sure

    Tc
    With love
    Fsams