This was so greatly written a heartfelt poem, this really touched me as i can totaly relate to, as always you have done another great job that just make you a greater poet in our eyes,
keep it up like always.

I adore this piece and the allusion you used in the title. It was, in fact, written and presented rather well and sound. The overall diction and flow of words were terrific. As a result, on the whole, I give you my props for writing such a fantastic piece. ~Marian

Good job!!!

God bless u

Beautifully written and very heart touching.

Tis a great poem joe, love the title, unfolds good, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

I loved this poem 5/5 :)

A sad but beautiful poem!
Good job.

5/5 Ingrid

I'm not that great with words,
But to you I can promise this,
My love for you is oh so real
And you'll always have a place in my heart.

these were my fav lines
5/5

yours,
~gIrL~

Hey, great poem. Sets a nice mood and really gets the message across. Portrays emotions very well. Greta

Short.. but your poems usually are.
i like the flow and the vocabulary.
nicely done, joe.

Great poem its so romantic/sweet

Wow. Simple but elegant, I'd say. I like the verse, 'These memories I have of us,
I'll hold deep within my heart and soul,
For it's all I have left of you
And the times we had spent together.'

I think it's soooo cute!

Awww. that put a smile on my face. it sounded so professional. it would make a gorgeous song. =] 5/5

B-E-A-UTIFUL!!!!!!!! excellent work!

This is real deep i get esacly what you mean in this poem 5/5

Perfectly penned poem of lost love, this can resonate within anyone who has lost someone they didn't want to lose. I'm sure most on here will see how heartfelt and real this piece is.
With some love poems, they gain a certain amount of pretention and self worth. You made this all about how the person will always have a special place within you.

Lovely poem. Very unlike most of the others I have read from you. Shows a softer side; That side should come out and play more often.

[5/5]
~Pete.

Awww i so know that feeling dude!xo

Short and sweet. Just like all of your other work. Lol. But what I love about your work is that even though it is short, the emotions are strong and the love is felt in such a little amount of words. Which is great. The flow was flawless in this peice and you ended it great.

Again, great job. 5.5

Amber :]]

Most of the time I dont like directness in poetry Im more of a fan of metaphores but the bluntness of this peice seems to fit quite well. I like this because I can really feel all of the pain that the author is going through. It sounds like a fresh heartbreak and the words just flowed through you by way of the pen. Nice work, short and sweet.