Picture Perfect [Palindrome]

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Jun 22, 2007


*Perfect picture*
Meek smile
seductively pose
cheap style
hidden lies
silent eyes
forbidden cries
twisted mind
-Fake-
mind twisted
cries forbidden
eyes silent
lies hidden
style cheap
pose seductive
smile meek
*Picture perfect*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I'm not sure if I really liked this poem so much.
    One aspect I definitely want to discuss is the length. It's nice if, in a small amout of space, an author can express a lot. I don't feel like you did that. I think that expanding this poem will only make it better.
    However, I liked the palindrome style. I feel like it added a little extra emotion to the overall poem, but not enough to really give it a kick.
    I do, however, think your use of adjectives was great. You used fantastic imagery in this piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is the first time I have read a Palindrome. I like what you have written

  • 17 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    Nicely written!!1=D good job!!! Awesome