I'm not sure if I really liked this poem so much.
One aspect I definitely want to discuss is the length. It's nice if, in a small amout of space, an author can express a lot. I don't feel like you did that. I think that expanding this poem will only make it better.
However, I liked the palindrome style. I feel like it added a little extra emotion to the overall poem, but not enough to really give it a kick.
I do, however, think your use of adjectives was great. You used fantastic imagery in this piece.