by TaNyabAbEE Jun 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Listen to the sound of breeze, |
by Debbie
I adore this piece. I'm unsure if the slang word 'thru' was intended (I prefer 'through'), whereas the scenery your words portrayed is so gorgeous. It was, in fact, written and presented rather well and sound. The overall diction and flow of words were terrific. As a result, on the whole, I give you my props for writing such a fantastic piece. ~Marian |