by Anthony Jun 22, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
We will not return from were we came. |
That is really sad |
by Krazy
I think this is ok, it definitely has great potential. couple of things, it's 'their' not 'there' in the beginning few lines. i'd try not to repeat the til dry, as is disrupts the flow. very good last line, very strong to match the beginning. |