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by Ingrid Jun 22, 2007 category : Love, romance / lasting love
Near the riverbed I stood before you the wind blowing through my long blond hair I asked you where you wanted to go to and you said that you didn't care As long as I'm with you I'll be fine and you caressed my shoulders that were bare I've waited such a long time for you to be mine but now that I'm with you our love we will share And so we stood naked, face to face together forever in a lover's embrace
by Elapsed
Short and Sweet.. loved it!.. great job
by David
Whoa nice poem. it was excellent and was a kinda story as well. excellent job. 5/5 David
by WiNgS Of StEeL
I really like this poem!!!..great job!! keep it up! bree