This was fantastic =) Dark, stormy, full of passion and fantastic =) 5/5
Rhea

...Good flow. Rather dark, of course and it's awesome what with content and words. Has some interesting imagery that goes well with this piece. The rhyming was effective. Short but excellent the way it is. The first stanza is gripping with a good second to continue that strand. Must admit that the third seems...strangely constructed when considering the previous ones. Maybe work on that only but otherwise awesome write.
~Faith-less

It is excellent. One of the best poems in dark poetry. Wording is powerful. I am really impressed with atmosphere that you created. 5/5

This is great. rrly great <333