True all the way through (revised)

by Cotton Candy Clouds   Jun 23, 2007


This is something that was writen to me by one of my x's while we were going out

Not a day goes by
without me thinking about your face,
glistening in the setting sun.
And then, my heart starts to race
your voice as gentle as the ocean breeze,
the way you tell me "i love you."
I just wish time would freeze.
Your holding me ever so tightly
then we start dancing oh so slow,
never letting go.
Closer and closer we get
gosh, this just seems to fit,
looking in each others eyes
our hearts in the skies.
This love...
a love that no one can shake,
no amount of miles can break.
A love that cannot be rendered,
cause your everything, your everything to me
true all the way through <3

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Omgg! that was so adorablee!! youre so lucky that he would write something like this to youu!

    a love that no one can shake
    no amount of miles can break

    ^that was great.. you can tell he really loves youu... great workk 5/5 from me, and thank you for the commentss

  • 17 years ago

    by StephanieH

    Awhhh!! you are lucky to have a guy to write you such a lovely poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    its a good poem, and really sweet, I dont know what i would do if i lived soo far away from my boyfriend, I think i will go crazy. the poem is very cute and special.
    kisses stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by LOST iN LOVE

    Aww..this is so cute..<3

  • 17 years ago

    by The Other Half Of Will

    Aww.. this is very cute poem... it really sucks that you live so far apart... i go crazy if i don't see my boyfriend at least once a week... i can't even imagine how a year would feel =( Stay strong. You inspired me =)

    -Kelsey

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