by marilyn marti Jun 23, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Could I have closed my eyes much sooner |
by reborn
U gonna hate me voted 3/5. liked the first 2 paragraphs just didn't like that last one at all. poem was too short n last paragraph didn't have the best rimes. didn't feel it. |
by Baby Rainbow
This poem is well written with hurt emotions but there is a point in trying cos things will get better xxx |