I love it... It is awesome and you would have to be pretty dumb not to understand it.. no offence but yeah..

Beck

C'est tres bon keenan, je n'ai pas su que vous parlez francais, love the wording and story behind it, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Honestly, quite a beautiful piece. My french is a little off seeing as I havnt spoken it in years but I loved how you described the vampire as yours and as beautiful. It truely gave it a twist. The first line was capturing I belive it went something like "my vampire in the night" it really stood out as it seemed eerie. Well done on writing such a facinating piece and trying a different langauge. ~mel

This poem really captured me
the atmosphere you create is very intriguing
i love the images you use to create such atmosphere: le nuit, la lune, la visage cache dans une voile.....

"les feuilles danse autour d'elle" <-- this is one of my fav lines

and the vampire image is also great because it adds mistery to the whole picture.

5/5
and i added it to my favs