Very very gooooood:):):)

girl i loved it :):)

keep it up:)

khuloodan:)
smile all the time:)

It's nice..muahzz***

~Yanitza~

I like this poem. so how did he die? It's ok if you dont want to talk about it, sorry to hear though. If u get the time can you vote on mine and maybe comment to!? thx

We all die, some people take their own life. One can't always make their way in sadness. And it doesn't matter if others try and help, you have to decide to fight. Love can be the best thing on this earth, but I find that its the biggest reason we feel pain.

So much feeling put in his one good job

laura

This was a very good poem Lyndsy. I loved your choice of words and how neatly organized your poem is.. it had a lot of emotion in it. Something confused me though, the girl in this poem went from hating his guts to knowing he cares and that she loves him so much. Non the less, it was a beautiful poem! Great job, keep up the good work. 5/5 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~