Would u love me still?

by lish   Jun 23, 2007


Would u love me still?
if i had feelings for another

would u love me still?
if i said i was in love with your brother

would u love me still?
if i told you that i cheated

would u love me still?
if our relationship became heated

would u love me still?
if everything i said was a lie

would u love me still?
if i wanted you to die

would u love me still?
if i just didn't agree

would u love me still?
if i said i wasn't me

would u love me still?
if our love was foregone

would u love me still?
or would u just move on

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  • 17 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    I really like the use of rhetorical questions. once again you should put capitals in your work. simple yet sweet. well done xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    I loved this, i love the repetitiveness but i think instead of
    would u love me still? you should try
    would u love me?

    but thats just my opinion, nicely penned though. one other thing, is this true.? 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    Wow another great poem it was beautifully written and had so much truth in it excellent job

  • 17 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    Creative way of expressing yourslef.
    You are an amazing writer and this is a really good poem! 5/5
    <3 Stef

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I like the repetition in this poem.. This poem kinda reminded me of my past relationship..

    But anyway.. The only thing I don't like in this poem is the ending.. I wish it ended in a different way but it's still a great poem.

    Keep up the good work!