This is good ...the flow was perfect and the rhyming was on point...and i really like how you used couplets on this one....

but if i was him i wouldnt still love you if you did all of that lol...

but great poem.5/5

The ending is great, very effective. the rest of the poem is really good, too. You created good atmosphere through it and the flow is great, constant in all parts.

I liked this poem, although to me I wasn't keen on the meaning portrayed behind the poem maybe because i'm just against cheating and so on. The repetition was effective though and the flow was great. Quite a different piece I have to admit. The rhyming couplets were great. Overall a good read. ~Mel

Hehehe i would not rather love u if im in that situation! well thats only my opinion. great expressing ur feelings through ur poet! it was good the way u keep on repeating the words.

I like the repetition in this poem.. This poem kinda reminded me of my past relationship..

But anyway.. The only thing I don't like in this poem is the ending.. I wish it ended in a different way but it's still a great poem.

Keep up the good work!

Creative way of expressing yourslef.
You are an amazing writer and this is a really good poem! 5/5
<3 Stef

Wow another great poem it was beautifully written and had so much truth in it excellent job

I loved this, i love the repetitiveness but i think instead of
would u love me still? you should try
would u love me?

but thats just my opinion, nicely penned though. one other thing, is this true.? 5/5

I really like the use of rhetorical questions. once again you should put capitals in your work. simple yet sweet. well done xoxo