Thats very very deep writing. its good poem xxx

Thanks ^_^

Kind of cliche to me but also it had a bit of twist. I did enjoy that twist because I belive it made it not as cliche as most poems. Emotions were interesting and powerful in some places. I did like this. Good effort. ~mel

This one is a great poem, it's my first time to read a twisted poem and i enjoy reading it. i was analyzing the meaning behind it,i finally get what you mean in it and it was so sad..Great work keep it up!!1

Every stanza has superb atmosphere!!! I really enjoyed in this poem. Very interesting and original ending. (it reminds me on one mine old poem) Imagery is great and you wrote this piece excellently. It really deserves 5/5