This poem is so sad, and cute at the same time! I can understand you cause i miss somebody too......,great poem! I loved it! 5/5
*Melody*:)

The feeling of loss is felt in every word that you have written. When you write your poetry from the heart it always makes for excellent piece of work. May your heart once again be filled with peace and joy again soon.

sadaddy

Aww, that'S a sweetTpoeM! I likE iT :)

luzaN

Very good job i can relate to it

read my poem "pain" it has similar story

Really wonderfull poem