by Jenni Marie Jun 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
My mind is swirling in pain |
This poem was so sad,heart breaking deep and emotional.I can relate to it very well.Each stanza was very well written.I especially like the last stanza it was really heart breaking.The rhyming was good enough and the flow was even better.This poem really spoke to me.It was really touching.The moment I finished reading it I felt like reading it over and over again!!!It was really a beautiful and penned poem!!! |