Silk Sand (Double Haiku)

Great haiku, beautifully written with excellent choice of words.
Good imagery, I felt like I was there.
5/5

I can hear the seagulls over head...the ocean crashing at my feet as I lay relaxing in the sun. *sigh*....I'm now at peace. Thanks for writing such a beautiful haiku.

This was a pretty poem. your description was nice, and i was able to picture most of what you were saying. maybe altering words you could put more power into this poem.