by .K.i.T.t.Y.
This was a pretty poem. your description was nice, and i was able to picture most of what you were saying. maybe altering words you could put more power into this poem. |
by OHgreenman
I can hear the seagulls over head...the ocean crashing at my feet as I lay relaxing in the sun. *sigh*....I'm now at peace. Thanks for writing such a beautiful haiku. |
by Nix
Great haiku, beautifully written with excellent choice of words. |