Wow that is depressing i can relate 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Its is kind of depressing, again i can relate to this one in a sort, but i th ought that it flowed well and the structure was good

"My mind`s not where it should be, it`s drifted way afar.
My soul`s in another dimension, certainly not where you are."

this is my favorite part^^^

i give this a 5/5