This poem almost made me cry. You wrote it excellently, and it's full of sadness. Great piece.
5/5

I liked it alot, i mean i can relate to this poem in a way, but there was a problem.....

"Forever and a year, adding on to the stars..
Counting up the costs of all the burdened stars."

as the rest of this poem rhymes you made to lines end in the same word, and you shouldnt do that in this case, i give this a 4/5