Breaking Into Pieces.

by Teria   Jun 23, 2007


Breaking Into Pieces.

You see this little shape, the one before your eyes?
You see this tiny image laughing at your disguise?
You see this broken glass shattering at your glare?
You see this bubbling blood bubbling because you care?
You see this sharpened pencil breaking off the lead?
You see this open casket awaiting for the dead?
You see this life before you breaking into pieces?
You see this morning`s glory crumbling before your feet?
You see this beautified light, the one before your eyes?
You see this tiny image laughing at your disguise?
And, baby.. Do you see this life before you breaking into pieces?

I know you do, baby. I created your ending.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Ok, well it was different, and some advice, if you are gonna rhyme in a poem, rhyme through the whole thing, dont start rhyming and then stop, it makes the strucutre down graded, but non the less, this deserves a

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    Wow, this is different...but nice

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    I liked this poem because it was different from many of the other poems of yours that I've read. I like the new style and the interesting structure to the whole poem. Great job. 5/5.

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By Teria