Scared And Alone

by Reminders Torture   Jun 23, 2007


She is so scared and to be all alone.
she sits in the corner with a heart filled with prone.
she sits there in the dark thinking about her life.
some times she wonders to die or just take a knife.

she is so scared and to be all alone.
thinking about her past and sits beside the phone.
she sits there laying or some times she sits there,
waiting.she wonders if anyone dares to care.

she is so scared and to be all alone.
she sits in the corner with a heart filed with prone.
she wonders if anyone dares to ask or care.
some times she wonders if they know if she is there.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Again, too predictable rhymes, but despite that, whole poem is very emotional and greatly written. I've been through similar moment in my life. You can greatly pass the emotions to the reader, that makes your pieces very powerful and effective.

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Shes not alone :) and she never will be alone :) this a beautifull poem describing that most dreadfull of human feelings, lonelynes :) i enjoyed reading this and it made me smile just knowing that when i do feel alone im not :) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Both sad nd dark..... i dunno y but i jus like it keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I feel like that, this is good and i like it xxxx

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