Aww what a beautiful poem!! definitely a 5/5 I can relate a lot to that, and the wording is so amazing. It was already really powerful but I think it would be more effective if you formatted it more like lines, rather than a pragraph.. that way you could give more of a sense of how you feel it should be read. great job tho!! <3Robin

I agree with Robin you did an outstanding job on the poem it's self, but need to make it more presentable , so it catches the readers eye and makes em want to read more , great job keep it up, your friend Tracy d 5/5