by jessica Jun 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
THE WAY U LOOK AT ME MAKES ME FEEL LIKE IM THE ONLY GURL IN SITE...WEN U LOOK INTO MY EYES N TELL ME IM BEAUTIFUL IT DRIVES ME CRAZY...WEN U KISS ME I MELT INSIDE...WEN U HOLD ME IN UR ARMS I FEEL PROTECTED FROM NETHIN AND EVERTHIN...MY LOVE FOR U I CANT EXPLAIN....I JUST WANT CHU TO KNO I WANNA BE WIT U FOREVER SO PLZ DONT EVER LET ME GO CUZ BABY I LOVE U WIT ALL MY LIFE...I LOVE U JAKE |
by Marie
I think your poems have a lot of potential if you would organize them a little more. You seem to be extremely good at letting out emotion but poetry is organization too. |