by Vanessa Jun 23, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Pain fresh in rippling emerald pools of sin, |
Wow very awesome but shouldnt this b in dark?? seems lik it should b..but wow this poem wuz lik very awesome..a 5/5 |
Great poem, so touching. The flow is superb, and wording is really good. |
by nikki
Wow. i loved it. the flow was good, the structure was great, the wording of the poem is just amazing. the way you put things into words. 5/5 |
Really osm write an amazing poetress you are lol thanx for the comment total5/5 |
by Goran Rahim
Wow, this was another wonderful work by you, as always your poems are so great and full of meaning, u are a great inspiration, keep it up dear. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it |