Aww that is such a completely beautiful poem! I really loved it, the words are so perfectly written. 5/5 for sure! <3Robin
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This poem is so sad!!!
it was beautifully written!
amazing job!
5/5
--Jess

I Liked It Alot...This Theme Has Been Written About Before But Never Like This..I Really Enjoyed My Read 5/5

-Your Friend
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Though I particularly am not keen with the poem's universal thought, this work somehow managed to get a hold of my attention throughout. In fact, I find this piece quite endearing and too heartrending for me to read. It even tugged my heart and soul. Furthermore, the emotions you've integrated certainly do a significant role, which--in my own view--is one of the major highlights of this piece.

On the contrary, the enhancement of certain technical aspects, such as the poem's structure and grammar usage, is rendered necessary at this point, in order to better this work. But, even then, this is a fine piece on the whole. Thanks for sharing. ~Marian

I thought it was very good, but i agree with Marian, the universal thought isnt something much people read about because it doesnt interest them.but this particular peice was very captivating. and it was longer than your usual and the ending was just beautiful, 5/5