Call of Hope

by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx   Jun 24, 2007


Passion of Demise
Flares inside me
As I walk in the dawn alone
Eyes full of hatred and sadness
As the rain falls above
My hair never leaving my head
The emotions that flows in me
Brought me only the cliff of sorrow
Remnants of you never leaving me
The outline of happiness drawn on your face
Remembering all the things we've been through
Only brought tears in my eyes
The wind blew strong
Touching my shivering body
Felt the bitterness of life
Which will eventually take me away
I tried to jump to end it all
But thought that it has no point
Sacrificing won't bring you back
It will only bring me to eternal despair
The depths of hell calling my name
Not knowing where to go..
Live in eternal sorrow
Or fall into the hands of hell
which took you away from me
Help me.. dear Antoinette
Take me away from this unwanted past.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nix

    Help me.. dear Antoinette
    ^except this line whole piece is amazing!!!
    Flow is great and imagery is superbly good. You created vivid pictures in my mind!

  • 18 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    'Passion of Demise'
    Beautiful words, very passionate and simple yet, powerful.
    This poem has a mystery about it,

    'Sacrificing won't bring you back'
    A very understanable and passionate piece.
    Loved it.
    Comment any of mine.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    I think this is the better one of the two i have read today.. this was such an amazing, deep, heartfelt write! Your words once again thrilled me.. they really helped with the poem, i could imagin the person sanding there, falling to peices- not knowing what to do; where to go. I admire how you write, you really capture every lottle detail making a perfect description. Amazing!
    once again.. 5/5
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This one is a beautiful poem and admire the way you write every detail of your imagination coz it appears on a perfect description though i don't know the last stanza seems hanging somewhere, i expect something more intense. just opinion but very well written. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    This was a beautiful poem, i could imagine someone stood on a cliff on a windy day, it was really well written 5/5

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