by Brittney Follett Jun 24, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Father where have you gone? |
by Cella Bella
This a beautiful and very touching piece of poetry. I really liked the happy ending, too bad everything can't end that way. I feel... sord of inspired after reading, I just loved the message. Great read! 5/5 |
Very touching, I like the ending, it is very positive. |
by Fsams
I am very happy that you have written this piece. The thing that I really wanna appreciate is that the use of descriptive grammar as evident in the second line, that is the use of double negation. Very nice and sad poem. 5.5 |
This was amazing done very well. |
by Michelle18
Awwwwww so sad and heartfelt..i was almost in tears...i really liked it..5/5 |