Verily, this is such a beautiful work. It utterly had, in fact, tugged my heart and soul to an endearing extent. I adored how you weaved the poem's progression and presentation; they were superbly done, indeed. I only have a grievance with the lack of more punctuations, which is rather unimportant. I further adored the overall thought of the poem. It was certainly uplifting and inspiring. And it never failed to give me a smile, too.

So, to reiterate, this truly is a bittersweet and heartwarming piece. It moved me exceedingly. And I thank you for recommending this piece to be reviewed by me. =) 5/5 Thanks for sharing and God bless. ~Marian

Awwwwww so sad and heartfelt..i was almost in tears...i really liked it..5/5

good job!

~Michelle~

This was amazing done very well.
Your clothes smell like you.
They make me miss you more.
In tears I lay in your coat
My heart is still so sore
that was my favorit stanza!
nicly done i can relat to this poem just not hwo it ends up but the ending was very good 5/5

I am very happy that you have written this piece. The thing that I really wanna appreciate is that the use of descriptive grammar as evident in the second line, that is the use of double negation. Very nice and sad poem. 5.5

Very touching, I like the ending, it is very positive.
Te poem was heart-breaking in some parts, truly greatly written.

This a beautiful and very touching piece of poetry. I really liked the happy ending, too bad everything can't end that way. I feel... sord of inspired after reading, I just loved the message. Great read! 5/5

marcella