Sorry We Failed

by Nathan Turner   Jun 24, 2007


The way I am now, I just want to engrave your name in my arm
I'll never forget your face nor your charm
You were on my mind 24/7
When we were together I felt like I was in heaven

I am truly sorry for hurting you so much
I never realised
Never realised how much I loved your touch

Why did I end it? Why?!
The least I could have done for you was try
You told me your past and I bailed
I'm so sorry we failed

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bittersweet Sundown

    This poem is well written, although you had a spelling error with REALIZED. Although you probably knew that =]. Anywho, the poem was really good. I liked it a lot. Kind of relates me to an old situation I was in a year ago. 5/5. Good work.

    ~Arissa

  • 17 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    AWWW!!! so sweet.
    a real expression of tru love!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    This is very heart felt. It screams of regret and sadness. It's a very well written poem, structured nicely and flows very well. I can't get over the emotion in this poem, it's sooo good. 5/5

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 17 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Firstly, it's spelt "realized".
    Secondly, I really like this, because its so common between people.
    But, as we all learn, you can't hold on to your regrets.
    Good poem, Nathan.

    Take care,
    not-bulletproof.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mel

    The emotion and honesty in it was great. it kind of seemed like you forced the rhyme sometimes though. still, it was good.

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