This is very good, seen a couple grammer mistakes, capitalize the beginning of every paragraph, capitalize the first letters of all the words in the title" Just You And Me And Irony" and add periods and commas, but these are only suggestions, its good the way it is, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

This was quite a beautiful piece, Marie. It actually reminded me of the movie, "Me, Myself & Irene", perhaps due to its refrain. How you showed the sentiments of a heartbreak captivated me to say the least. It was both bitter and sweet as well. I think you did a fine job with this work. Well done! 5/5 ~Marian